This is the first line of the 11 Second Club's September clip. I wasn't able to finish the whole thing, but I tried to get enough done that this could be funny on its own. Please give me some feedback, I've received some good advice already and plan on improving it so I can put it in my demo reel (I'm trying to get more animation in there). I was disappointed with the feedback I got on the 11 Second Club website, the best being, "Good start!", so I'll try to get suggestions here. Thanks for your help.
(This video is a little small, so in case you were wondering, the tag on the sword says:
Love, Your Wife)
1 year ago